Ruchie is able to share information about herself in her website (www.ruchierai.weebly.com) –
her family and student background, and her interests. At her home page, she
shows some pictures of herself. This makes the website very personal in nature.
Looking in her other pages, I see several quotes from three
persons she looks up to - Steve Jobs, Paulo Coelho, and Gurbaksh Chahal. The
inspirational words shared by Ruchie through her website shows how she intends
to achieve her goals in life. She also shares her dreams in life.
The website’s warm colors make the site pleasing to the eyes. Yet,
a bit of color to the sepia tone of the color scheme should have been done to,
at least, the text. The black copy is a bit dull when placed in this kind of
theme. The Google feature in one of her pages is definitely an eyesore. It’s
too bright because it is in white, whereas her theme is dark and sepia. She
could just omit this feature.
But I believe that the layout’s good in all of her pages. Her use
of a slideshow feature is good as well. She used some pictures to show her 3
icons in life, and the way she puts a comment box and her contact details to
make viewers have an easier time to contact her.
However, she could have put more about her student background,
such as her extra-curricular activities, if there is, to show companies how she
is in her college stay in La Salle. She could add information about her
exposure to marketing training. She could have had more information about her
interests and hobbies. And since she mentioned that she wanted to be a writer
one day, she could give a sample of the works, which she already wrote. She also
mentioned she wanted to travel. She could give a list of the places she wants
to go.
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